In his article, "Blog Stage 7," Johnny Albarran makes a well established argument. He makes it very clear that he is against the building of the wall on the border between United States and Mexico. He uses many facts pertaining to the current and post construction of the wall. He is clearly very knowledgeable on the subject. He presents numerical data in regards to the costs of building the wall, using a fence that has been built in San Diego. I think the use of the financial burden of this one wall is a key argument to use. Since the economy is not in a great place at the time, using the financial burden of the wall is a great way to convince readers that a wall is not a good option for society. I am not sure if construction on walls in other parts of the country exists, but I think Johnny could have made a much stronger argument if he included the financial status of other walls. However, one financial crisis that goes from a projected $14 million to an actual $77 million is more than enough to convert many American citizens. Money is frequently the strongest argument for any project and it was a very critical argument to be used. He did it very well and organized the given data in a way that was straight forward and not mind boggling confusing from having numbers thrown around. The financial argument was very well put together.
Johnny also argues that building a wall will not prevent illegal immigration or drug trafficking. " if someone wants to come in, they will find a way" (p. 4). He supports this idea by giving a specific example of one tunnel connecting Tijuana and San Diego. The use of examples is very important when making an argument and he even talks about the level of sophistication established in this one tunnel.
It is clear to me how Johnny feels about a wall between the United States and Mexico. Although he does not expand into more detail, I think he does a great job supporting his idea. I would have liked to see proposed alternatives expanded on and some of the costs there, I think it would have made a more solid argument. However, I do think Johnny made a well thought out and put together argument, focusing on what many American citizens would consider some of the biggest problems. I do agree with Johnny, but for slightly different reasons. I simply think it is insulting and rude to want to build a wall. We are the United States for goodness sake, we should have some class.